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+Tickling+ Perona by ScreampunkArts

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a ticklish sableye.. by Californian-sableye

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laughter in the dark :gifty: by Californian-sableye

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To :iconerboiler:'s Christmas Party art idea, right here: fav.me/daq504h :)
No nudity, ball gags, sniffing, or suggestive content, but otherwise, you can use multiple scenarios. Licking is allowed as long as it's not the primary focus of the RP and not overly detailed. Massaging is also allowed, in addition to OCs. What that means is you can use OCs for any one of the scenarios down below, or create an original story involving OCs. If you already have OCs and want to make a story using them, go right ahead. Additionally, you may also use OCs from other artists, preferably artists that don't mind seeing their OCs in ticklish scenarios. You are not limited to the shows listed below, and you can introduce your own creative ideas.

List of topics I will RP on:
We Bare Bears (assuming you want to tickle Chloe, but I'm open to the main characters as well.)
MLP:FIM (humans and ponies, but you can also tickle griffons.)
Gravity Falls
Fairy Tail
Boku Dake Ga Inai Machi
Digimon(series [except Xros] this means every human and Digimon from the first four seasons, so Renamon, Gatomon, and Ranamon are all available as 'lers and 'lees:) (Smile))
Hey Yo Yorang (if you want to tickle the red haired girl that got tickled in the first episode, also know as Chi Men Wua.)
Star Vs. The Forces of Evil
Kirby anime (Tiff and Sirica)
Kara no Kyoukai (Shiki)
Fate/stay Night
Fate/zero
Mario (series) (This includes Paper Mario and the Mario & Luigi Series)
Legend of Zelda (series)
Megaman (classic series)
Megaman Battle Network
Megaman comics (Quake Woman, Dr. Lalinde, Roslyn Krantz, Vesper Woman, and Simone Miller)
Megaman Legends
Megaman X
Megamam Zero
Kid Icarus Uprising
Donkey Kong (series)
Death Note (series)
Earthbound and Mother 3
Metroid (Samus and Dark Samus)
RWBY
Overwatch
Pokemon(series) (Pokémon, Gym Leaders, and Elite Four members, but you can also use the player characters, NPCs and characters from Pokémon Adventures manga.)
Super Smash Bros. (series) (includes Wii Fit Trainer)
Street Fighter (series, includes Street Fighter II through Street Fighter V.)
Crash Bandicoot (Coco)
Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends
Kim Possible
Danny Phantom
The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy
Ed Edd & Eddy
Spongebob Squarepants
Fairly Odd Parents
Sonic the Hedgehog (series)
Sonic comics
Sonic Boom (mainly for Sticks, but if there are any other characters there that would make great 'lers or 'lees, please let me know.:) (Smile))
Homestuck (I am currently reading Act 4, so I know of the main four characters and some of the trolls.)
Star Fox (series)
Looney Tunes
Mickey Mouse (this includes his friends.)
Dexter's Laboratory (Dee Dee)
Samurai Pizza Cats
Bleach
Sword Art Online
El Goonish Shive
Batman (series) (The Gotham Gals, or Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, and Catwoman. Of course, it's not limited to these.)
Superman (series)
Hyperdimension Neptunia
Konosuba
Re: Zero
Undertale (Goat Mom, Undyne, Alphys, and Chara. I included Chara for those that consider Chara to be female. If you want to tickle another character outside of the above, please let me know. This also applies to the other options listed.)
My Life as a Teenage Robot
X-Men (series)
Kingdom Hearts
Five Nights at Freddy's (First four games, animatronics or human versions of them for those that don't want to tickle the animatronics)
Five Nights at Freddy's Sister Location (Animatronics or human versions of them. Can include Bonnie puppet.)
Wander Over Yonder
Naruto Shippuden
One Piece
Cave Story
Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood
Squid Girl / Shinryaku! Ika Musume 
Kung fu Panda
Mighty No. 9 (mainly for Call. Although this game is terrible, that doesn't mean a proper story can't be created with these characters.)
Codename: Kids Next Door
Shantae
The legend of Dark Witch
Warioware
Steven Universe
Phineas and Ferb
Transformers Prime (humans and robots)
The Simpsons
Hellsing Ultimate
Soul Eater
Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney (I know a bit about this series, not a lot.)
Fire Emblem (my knowledge on this is limited.)
SWAT Kats: The Radical Squadron
Touhou (series)
Zootopia
Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Avatar: The Last Airbender
Legend of Korra
Totally Spies
Rio (given this cute little piece right here fav.me/dak3z44, I'm interested in using Jewel and Gabi.)
Freedom Planet
Tangled
Dragonball Z
Amazing World of Gumball
Adventure Time
Toy Story
The Princess and the Frog
Splatoon
Final Fantasy VII (Yuffie and Tifa)
Darkwing Duck
Mob Psycho 100
Harry Potter
Fire Emblem (my knowledge on this is limited.)
Percy Jackson and the Olympians
Heroes of Olympus
Peanuts (comics)
Pippi Longstocking
Akame Ga Kill
Black Lagoon
Indivisible (Ajna, as well as other characters.)

Note that this list is incomplete.

Enjoy.:)
Phineas and Ferb were sitting under there tree, running ideas past each other. Well, more like Phineas was running ideas past Ferb, who listened carefully. "Alright, Ferb, I know what we're going to do today! Also where's Perry?" he adds, seeing that their pet platypus had disappeared again.

The plan for today was simple: build a contraption that could test the nerves of an individual at a moderate pace to see if the person can improve over time. After a montage, they had successfully built a machine resembling a somewhat bulky chair. It could restrain a person's arms and legs, and contained several tickling tools within it. "Well, all we need to do now is find a test subject," Phineas smiles, satisfied with the work they did.

"What'cha doin'?" Isabella comes in through their front gate. "We just finish building a nerve stimulation device. All we need is someone who can try it out," Phineas smiles at her while explaining the invention. "Alright," Isabella smiles. Perhaps this will get Phineas to like me, she thinks as she approaches the chair.

At that moment, Candace comes through the front door. "Phineas, did you really think this would fool me?" she gestures at the chair, with its bulky design making it stick out. "I don't know what crazy things this does, but you are so busted!" she declares with a smirk as she snaps a photo of the chair with her phone.

At that moment, a set of thick cables emerged from the chair and grabbed Candance, forcing her into the chair and making her drop her phone, which shattered on the ground. The cables return inside the chair, and metal braces secure Candace's legs and arms. "Alright, you two better let me go!" Candace shouts while clearly annoyed. "We didn't do this! It must be acting on it's own. You should probably-" he pauses as he turns to Ferb, who took down notes on all of these newly discovered features. He gives Phineas a thumbs up, and Phineas returns the gesture. Great minds think alike.

Robot hands come out of the chair and untie her shoes. They start to lightly tickle her socked feet. Candace scrunched her face up, clearly trying to keep her laughter in. The hands respond by increasing the pace slightly, which causes her to burst into a wave of giggles. "Whahahahahat ihihihihihihis thihihihihihihis stuhuhuhuhuhupid thihihihihihing!" she shakes her legs as much as she can in her restraints while trying fight this, but she's failing miserably. "It's a nerve stimulation device. We wanted to use it to see how different people react and how that can be based on their disposition," Phineas replies. "Tuhuhuhuhuhurn ihihihihihihihit ohohohohohohohoff!" Candace starts laughing as it reaches her arches. "I...don't think we can do that at the moment. Ferb, make extra copies of the manual," Phineas tells him as Ferb rushes to a copy machine.

"It will take him a minute to get back, but we'll wait here," Phineas reassures her. "Cohohohouldn't yoohoohoohoohoohoohoo juhuhuhuhust reeheeheeheead ihihihihihi NAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAOW?" she asks as her laugher skyrockets when she feels the robot hands tickling her toes. "No, it's more proper if we all read it together," Phineas casually dismisses this suggestion. The robot hands peel off her socks, and start wiggling each individual toe while tickling the spaces between them. "AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Candace laughs extremely loudly from having the most sensitive spot on her feet tickled like this. Her toes squirm madly in a futile attempt to avoid this, and her feet move around very quickly.

The robot hands return within the chair, giving her a brief moment to recover. It would not last long though, as the robot hands were soon replaced by fluffy feather dusters. They slowly move towards her feet, and Candace reflexively pulls her feet as far back as possible. As soon as they make contact, she immediately explodes into waves of laughter greater than those from earlier. "EEEYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" she screams with laughter as her feet shake rapidly in response to this. The feather duster dance across her feet, tracing small circles. Eventually, they work their way up to Candace's toes and the spaces between them, driving her insane.

Finally, Ferb came back with the copies of the pamphlet. "Okay everyone, open your pamphlets to page 5," Phineas speaks over the sounds of Candace's laughter. All three of them, including Isabella, scan the page. Isabella then walks behind the chair, and lifts open a panel behind it. She then pushes a small red button, and the tickling stops. Candace takes deep breaths of air, before passing out in the chair.

"Well, I guess she'll wake up soon," Phineas shrugs. "Nice one Isabella." "Thanks," she smiles as she pushes a few more buttons, which adjusts the chair to resemble a massaging chair. The three of them head off to the park, but not before leaving a nice cold drink and a warm basin of water in the house. Phineas left a post-it note, which reads:

"I know that was probably torture for you, so we set this up for you. I hope you forgive us." From- Phineas.
The Nerve Experimentation Chair
Here's a nice little Phineas and Ferb tickle story focused on Candace.

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To :iconerboiler:'s Christmas Party art idea, right here: fav.me/daq504h :)

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