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This is very well executed. Phuram wanted a commission featuring their OC tickling Fire, and you delivered on this by making in flow in...


You wanted to make a tickling piece of Perona from this perspective, and you executed that excellently, from the way her feet feel clos...


I see that you used several different shades of blue on the armor of azul, making him look vibrant, as a single shade would have made h...


So here is my critique for this piece. The position is commonly used, but it is used in an effective way. The reactions on your OC as h...

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Aa always nudity, ball gags, sniffing, or suggestive content, but otherwise, you can use multiple scenarios. Licking is allowed as long as it's not the primary focus of the RP and not overly detailed. Massaging is also allowed, in addition to OCs. What that means is you can use OCs for any one of the scenarios down below, or create an original story involving OCs. If you already have OCs and want to make a story using them, go right ahead. Additionally, you may also use OCs from other artists, preferably artists that don't mind seeing their OCs in...'ticklish' scenarios. You are not limited to the shows listed below, and you can introduce your own creative ideas.

List of topics I will RP on:
We Bare Bears (assuming you want to tickle Chloe, but I'm open to the main characters as well.)
MLP:FIM (humans and ponies, but you can also tickle griffons.)
Gravity Falls
Fairy Tail
Boku Dake Ga Inai Machi
Digimon(series [except Xros] this means every human and Digimon from the first four seasons, so Renamon, Gatomon, and Ranamon are all available as 'lers and 'lees:) (Smile))
Hey Yo Yorang (if you want to tickle the red haired girl that got tickled in the first episode, also know as Chi Men Wua.)
Star Vs. The Forces of Evil
Kirby anime (Tiff and Sirica)
Kara no Kyoukai (Shiki)
Fate/stay Night
Fate/zero
Mario (series) (This includes Paper Mario and the Mario & Luigi Series)
Legend of Zelda (series)
Megaman (classic series)
Megaman Battle Network
Megaman comics (Quake Woman, Dr. Lalinde, Roslyn Krantz, Vesper Woman, and Simone Miller)
Megaman Legends
Megaman X
Megamam Zero
Kid Icarus Uprising
Donkey Kong (series)
Death Note (series)
Earthbound and Mother 3
Metroid (Samus and Dark Samus)
RWBY
Overwatch
Pokemon(series) (Pokémon, Gym Leaders, and Elite Four members, but you can also use the player characters, NPCs and characters from Pokémon Adventures manga.)
Super Smash Bros. (series) (includes Wii Fit Trainer)
Street Fighter (series, includes Street Fighter II through Street Fighter V.)
Crash Bandicoot (Coco)
Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends
Kim Possible
Danny Phantom
The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy
Ed Edd & Eddy
Spongebob Squarepants
Fairly Odd Parents
Sonic the Hedgehog (series)
Sonic comics
Sonic Boom (mainly for Sticks, but if there are any other characters there that would make great 'lers or 'lees, please let me know.:) (Smile))
Homestuck (I am currently reading Act 4, so I know of the main four characters and some of the trolls.)
Star Fox (series)
Looney Tunes
Mickey Mouse (this includes his friends.)
Dexter's Laboratory (Dee Dee)
Samurai Pizza Cats
Bleach
Sword Art Online
El Goonish Shive
Batman (series) (The Gotham Gals, or Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, and Catwoman. Of course, it's not limited to these.)
Superman (series)
Hyperdimension Neptunia
Konosuba
Re: Zero
Undertale (Goat Mom, Undyne, Alphys, and Chara. I included Chara for those that consider Chara to be female. If you want to tickle another character outside of the above, please let me know. This also applies to the other options listed.)
My Life as a Teenage Robot
X-Men (series)
Kingdom Hearts
Five Nights at Freddy's (First four games, animatronics or human versions of them for those that don't want to tickle the animatronics)
Five Nights at Freddy's Sister Location (Animatronics or human versions of them. Can include Bonnie puppet.)
Wander Over Yonder
Naruto Shippuden
One Piece
Cave Story
Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood
Squid Girl / Shinryaku! Ika Musume 
Kung fu Panda
Mighty No. 9 (mainly for Call. Although this game is terrible, that doesn't mean a proper story can't be created with these characters.)
Codename: Kids Next Door
Shantae
The legend of Dark Witch
Warioware
Steven Universe
Phineas and Ferb
Transformers Prime (humans and robots)
The Simpsons
Hellsing Ultimate
Soul Eater
Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney (I know a bit about this series, not a lot.)
Fire Emblem (my knowledge on this is limited.)
SWAT Kats: The Radical Squadron
Touhou (series)
Zootopia
Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Avatar: The Last Airbender
Avatar: Legend of Korra
Totally Spies
Rio (given this cute little piece right here fav.me/dak3z44, I'm interested in using Jewel and Gabi.)
Freedom Planet
Tangled
Dragonball Z
Amazing World of Gumball
Adventure Time
Toy Story
The Princess and the Frog
Splatoon
Final Fantasy VII (Yuffie and Tifa)
Darkwing Duck
Mob Psycho 100
Harry Potter
Fire Emblem (my knowledge on this is limited.)
Percy Jackson and the Olympians
Heroes of Olympus
Peanuts (comics)
Pippi Longstocking
Akame Ga Kill
Black Lagoon
Indivisible (Ajna, as well as other characters.)

Note that this list is incomplete.

Have fun.:)
This is very well executed. Phuram wanted a commission featuring their OC tickling Fire, and you delivered on this by making in flow in a well looking and well crafted story.

Most beach tickling pieces focus on sand, but this one stands out by featuring a character that stands out in a beach setting, a peculiar scenario you wouldn't expect to see in a beach scenario, and a reason for making it this easy for Fire's weakness to be exploited.

Your piece is fairly detailed while only focusing on the aspects needed, using cheating to allow for more detailed character poses, with only one panel detailing the beach. My only critique is how the bright tentacles contrast Fire's feet.

Naturally, this piece was amazing, and each panel was well drawn, so it captured it's intended effect.

Nicely done.:)
To :iconerboiler:'s Christmas Party art idea, right here: fav.me/daq504h :)
Aa always nudity, ball gags, sniffing, or suggestive content, but otherwise, you can use multiple scenarios. Licking is allowed as long as it's not the primary focus of the RP and not overly detailed. Massaging is also allowed, in addition to OCs. What that means is you can use OCs for any one of the scenarios down below, or create an original story involving OCs. If you already have OCs and want to make a story using them, go right ahead. Additionally, you may also use OCs from other artists, preferably artists that don't mind seeing their OCs in...'ticklish' scenarios. You are not limited to the shows listed below, and you can introduce your own creative ideas.

List of topics I will RP on:
We Bare Bears (assuming you want to tickle Chloe, but I'm open to the main characters as well.)
MLP:FIM (humans and ponies, but you can also tickle griffons.)
Gravity Falls
Fairy Tail
Boku Dake Ga Inai Machi
Digimon(series [except Xros] this means every human and Digimon from the first four seasons, so Renamon, Gatomon, and Ranamon are all available as 'lers and 'lees:) (Smile))
Hey Yo Yorang (if you want to tickle the red haired girl that got tickled in the first episode, also know as Chi Men Wua.)
Star Vs. The Forces of Evil
Kirby anime (Tiff and Sirica)
Kara no Kyoukai (Shiki)
Fate/stay Night
Fate/zero
Mario (series) (This includes Paper Mario and the Mario & Luigi Series)
Legend of Zelda (series)
Megaman (classic series)
Megaman Battle Network
Megaman comics (Quake Woman, Dr. Lalinde, Roslyn Krantz, Vesper Woman, and Simone Miller)
Megaman Legends
Megaman X
Megamam Zero
Kid Icarus Uprising
Donkey Kong (series)
Death Note (series)
Earthbound and Mother 3
Metroid (Samus and Dark Samus)
RWBY
Overwatch
Pokemon(series) (Pokémon, Gym Leaders, and Elite Four members, but you can also use the player characters, NPCs and characters from Pokémon Adventures manga.)
Super Smash Bros. (series) (includes Wii Fit Trainer)
Street Fighter (series, includes Street Fighter II through Street Fighter V.)
Crash Bandicoot (Coco)
Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends
Kim Possible
Danny Phantom
The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy
Ed Edd & Eddy
Spongebob Squarepants
Fairly Odd Parents
Sonic the Hedgehog (series)
Sonic comics
Sonic Boom (mainly for Sticks, but if there are any other characters there that would make great 'lers or 'lees, please let me know.:) (Smile))
Homestuck (I am currently reading Act 4, so I know of the main four characters and some of the trolls.)
Star Fox (series)
Looney Tunes
Mickey Mouse (this includes his friends.)
Dexter's Laboratory (Dee Dee)
Samurai Pizza Cats
Bleach
Sword Art Online
El Goonish Shive
Batman (series) (The Gotham Gals, or Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, and Catwoman. Of course, it's not limited to these.)
Superman (series)
Hyperdimension Neptunia
Konosuba
Re: Zero
Undertale (Goat Mom, Undyne, Alphys, and Chara. I included Chara for those that consider Chara to be female. If you want to tickle another character outside of the above, please let me know. This also applies to the other options listed.)
My Life as a Teenage Robot
X-Men (series)
Kingdom Hearts
Five Nights at Freddy's (First four games, animatronics or human versions of them for those that don't want to tickle the animatronics)
Five Nights at Freddy's Sister Location (Animatronics or human versions of them. Can include Bonnie puppet.)
Wander Over Yonder
Naruto Shippuden
One Piece
Cave Story
Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood
Squid Girl / Shinryaku! Ika Musume 
Kung fu Panda
Mighty No. 9 (mainly for Call. Although this game is terrible, that doesn't mean a proper story can't be created with these characters.)
Codename: Kids Next Door
Shantae
The legend of Dark Witch
Warioware
Steven Universe
Phineas and Ferb
Transformers Prime (humans and robots)
The Simpsons
Hellsing Ultimate
Soul Eater
Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney (I know a bit about this series, not a lot.)
Fire Emblem (my knowledge on this is limited.)
SWAT Kats: The Radical Squadron
Touhou (series)
Zootopia
Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Avatar: The Last Airbender
Avatar: Legend of Korra
Totally Spies
Rio (given this cute little piece right here fav.me/dak3z44, I'm interested in using Jewel and Gabi.)
Freedom Planet
Tangled
Dragonball Z
Amazing World of Gumball
Adventure Time
Toy Story
The Princess and the Frog
Splatoon
Final Fantasy VII (Yuffie and Tifa)
Darkwing Duck
Mob Psycho 100
Harry Potter
Fire Emblem (my knowledge on this is limited.)
Percy Jackson and the Olympians
Heroes of Olympus
Peanuts (comics)
Pippi Longstocking
Akame Ga Kill
Black Lagoon
Indivisible (Ajna, as well as other characters.)

Note that this list is incomplete.

Have fun.:)

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cfshipss Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
heres hoping you enjoyed your christmas
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Mastercree1 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
I did. Thank you.:)
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cfshipss Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
thats good:)
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banX8 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016
Merry Christmas !
I hope you have good time and i thanks you for RPing with me, i have a lot of fun on this and hope not being too bad
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Mastercree1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016
Merry Christmas.:)

I had a lot of fun with this, and you're amazing.:D
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banX8 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
Amazing me ? XD
Well thanks, i do my best with my bad English (i can't help myself and use English on the french way , so sometime i know it can be hard to deal) 
Hope we will continue enjoying RPs, it's not that hard to find ideas ;)
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Mastercree1 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
Yep.:giggle:

Agreed, we can continue to find new ideas for our RPs.:D
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Crimsondude123 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016
Merry Christmas :)
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Mastercree1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016
Thank you! Merry Christmas.:hug:
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Crimsondude123 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016
You are welcome :hugs:
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